Day 5 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
It\'s good to hear that you were able to lose weight.
I think you\'re given a chance to take care of your body for your family.
Thank you for answering your homework. ^-^
Q. What forms of exercise would you recommend to people who are very busy? Why?
A. I recommend \"walking\".
>>I recommend walking.
After work, go back to home by walk can be useful.
>>After work, it is helpful to walk home.
It doesn\'t need any exercise plan.
>>It doesn\'t need any exercise plans.
If you have pretty far distance from home to company, use bus or subway before 1 or 2 station where you have to get off, and go home after distance by walk.
>>If it\'s quite a long way from home to work, take a bus or subway before 1 or 2 stations when you have to get off, walk away and go home.
That can be useful and healthful.
>>It is useful and can be good for your health.
Except for the time poo coming out soon ;p
>>Except when you have to go to the bathroom.
In my experience, I was 65~66? kgs before go high school.
>>In my experience, I weighed 65 to 66 kilograms before high school.
My high school was pretty far from my home, and I walked with my friend to go to school for 3years.
>>High school was quite far from home, and I walked with my friend for three years to go to school.
After 2 years, I could lost my weight.
>>After two years, I was able to lose weight.
I remember I was 58~60kg.
>>I remember I was 58 to 60 kilograms.
And my physical constituation is changed, I have little low weight untill now.
>>And my physical condition has changed, and I have lost weight so far.
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