Day 5 homework

2019-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Q. What forms of exercise would you recommend to people who are very busy? Why? A. I recommend \"walking\". After work, go back to home by walk can be useful. It doesn\'t need any exercise plan. If you have pretty far distance from home to company, use bus or subway before 1 or 2 station where you have to get off, and go home after distance by walk. That can be useful and healthful. Except for the time poo coming out soon ;p In my experience, I was 65~66? kgs before go high school. My high school was pretty far from my home, and I walked with my friend to go to school for 3years. After 2 years, I could lost my weight. I remember I was 58~60kg. And my physical constituation is changed, I have little low weight untill now.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!

It\'s good to hear that you were able to lose weight.

I think you\'re given a chance to take care of your body for your family.

Thank you for answering your homework. ^-^


Q. What forms of exercise would you recommend to people who are very busy? Why?


A. I recommend \"walking\".
>>I recommend walking.
After work, go back to home by walk can be useful.
>>After work, it is helpful to walk home.
It doesn\'t need any exercise plan.
>>It doesn\'t need any exercise plans.
If you have pretty far distance from home to company, use bus or subway before 1 or 2 station where you have to get off, and go home after distance by walk.
>>If it\'s quite a long way from home to work, take a bus or subway before 1 or 2 stations when you have to get off, walk away and go home.
That can be useful and healthful.
>>It is useful and can be good for your health.
Except for the time poo coming out soon ;p
>>Except when you have to go to the bathroom.
In my experience, I was 65~66? kgs before go high school.
>>In my experience, I weighed 65 to 66 kilograms before high school.
My high school was pretty far from my home, and I walked with my friend to go to school for 3years.
>>High school was quite far from home, and I walked with my friend for three years to go to school.
After 2 years, I could lost my weight.
>>After two years, I was able to lose weight.
I remember I was 58~60kg.
>>I remember I was 58 to 60 kilograms.
And my physical constituation is changed, I have little low weight untill now.
>>And my physical condition has changed, and I have lost weight so far.

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