day 6_homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise: Have you ever seen a traffic accident? Describe in 5 or more sentences.
l just saw a few times that car accident on the road.
one's car has been hit by that car.
lt seens so serious.
many people were panic as well shocked me.
after that grow into a habit of look around to walk across the street.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing this experience.
Let\'s talk more about it in class.
Keep up the good work!
~~ Teacher Sharon
l just saw a few times that car accident on the road.
>> l just saw a few car accidents on the road.
one\'s car has been hit by that car.
>> One car was hit by another car.
It seens so serious.
>> It was a serious incident.
many people were panic as well shocked me.
>> Many people were as panicked and shocked as I was.
after that grow into a habit of look around to walk across the street.
>> After that, I have developed a habit of looking around before I cross the street.
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