day 7 _ homework

2018-04-20 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Happy Friday sharon ~ today as l have to departure to go on a trip at 2 l can't join the class. so, l changed class time earlier. let's talk about good one next monday. Have a nice weekend ^^ HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Tell me about a goal that you achieved for yourself. Answer in 5 sentences or more. l decided a simple goal at the beginning of this year. this is l do that any work out for an hour every day. lt is keeping it up. sometimes instead of running, l did riding a bike, go up a mountain and home trainnimg. from now on,l will have consistent work out.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I will miss you today.

I hope you enjoy your trip.

I\'ll call you on Monday!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

l decided a simple goal at the beginning of this year.

>> l decided on a simple goal in the beginning of this year.
this is l do that any work out for an hour every day.

>> That is to work out for an hour every day.
lt is keeping it up.

>> I have been keeping the promise I made to myself.
sometimes instead of running, l did riding a bike, go up a mountain and home trainnimg.

>> Sometimes, instead of running, l ride a bike, go mountain climbing or work out at home.
from now on,l will have consistent work out.

>> From now on, l will be consistent in my workout.

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