day 7_ homework

2018-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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THANK YOU ^^ l'm really looking foward to next class ! see you tomorrow sharon ~ HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What are some reasons why we might need to complain in a store or restaurant? Answer in 5 sentences or more. when we need to complain in retaurant that reason is clean the table. sometimes we can see the dirty and messy on it. at that time, l claim to clean the table to ground staff. on the other hand when l worked in cafe a customer complained me. the reason was too bitter. so l made coffee again and then apologized customer with some snack.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I\'m always excited about our classes.

It\'s so easy to talk to you.

Thank you for doing your homework.

I\'ll call you later!

~~ Teacher Sharon

when we need to complain in retaurant that reason is clean the table.

>> The usual reason for complaining in a restaurant is when a table is dirty.
sometimes we can see the dirty and messy on it.
>>  Sometimes, we can see the dirt and mess on it.
at that time, l claim to clean the table to ground staff.

>> In this instance, I ask the staff to clean the table.
on the other hand when l worked in cafe a customer complained me.

>>  On the other hand, when l worked in a café, a customer complained to me.
the reason was too bitter.

>> The reason was that his coffee was too bitter.
so l made coffee again and then apologized customer with some snack.

>> I made another cup of coffee and apologized to the customer and I gave him a free snack.

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