day 8_ homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Remember that you always have to take care of your health.
This will always keep you productive every day.
Always take care!
~~ Teacher Sharon
we must to getting healthy to eat good food.
>> We can be healthy by eating the right kind of food.
such as apple, black bean and proved natural food.
>> Examples of these are apples, black beans and other kinds of natural food.
l did even know that fact, so l\'ve eatten some fruits in the morning usual.
>> Knowing this fact, I have tried to eat fruits every morning.
lt was gave me improved skin.
>> This really improved the quality of my skin.
also, growing up my hair was getting soft.
>> My hair is also getting smoother every day.
l\'m sure that we can gain good one.
>> I\'m sure that we can always achieve good health.
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