day 8_ homework

2018-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Hi Sharon! today homework was interested to make sentence. l will wait for calling after a while :) thank you ! HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What is the meaning of the saying: "An apple a day keeps the doctor away?" Answer in 5 sentences or more. we must to getting healthy to eat good food. such as apple, black bean and proved natural food. l did even know that fact, so l've eatten some fruits in the morning usual. lt was gave me improved skin. also, growing up my hair was getting soft. l'm sure that we can gain good one.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Remember that you always have to take care of your health.

This will always keep you productive every day.

Always take care!

~~ Teacher Sharon

we must to getting healthy to eat good food.

>> We can be healthy by eating the right kind of food.
such as apple, black bean and proved natural food.

>> Examples of these are apples, black beans and other kinds of natural food.
l did even know that fact, so l\'ve eatten some fruits in the morning usual.

>> Knowing this fact, I have tried to eat fruits every morning.
lt was gave me improved skin.

>> This really improved the quality of my skin.
also, growing up my hair was getting soft.

>> My hair is also getting smoother every day.
 l\'m sure that we can gain good one.

>> I\'m sure that we can always achieve good health.

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