day 8_ homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your opinions.
It\'s great to hear these from you.
I\'ll talk to you in a bit.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
lf l had one month to live, l would be live to nomally like same routine.
>> If l had one month to live, l would like to live my daily routine.
and l want to have value things like volunteer work.
>> I want to do some valuable activities like volunteer work.
one of the things l\'m going to work for stray dogs.
>> One of the things I like to help out in is collecting stray dogs.
which is take a walking together, feed them and advertising adopted them.
>> I want to walk them, feed them and look for a suitable home for them.
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