day 8_ homework

2018-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What would you do if you were told you had one month to live? Answer in 5 sentences or more. lf l had one month to live, l would be live to nomally like same routine. and l want to have value things like volunteer work. one of the things l'm going to work for stray dogs. which is take a walking together, feed them and advertising adopted them.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your opinions.

It\'s great to hear these from you.

I\'ll talk to you in a bit.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

lf l had one month to live, l would be live to nomally like same routine.

>> If l had one month to live, l would like to live my daily routine.
and l want to have value things like volunteer work.

>> I want to do some valuable activities like volunteer work.
one of the things l\'m going to work for stray dogs.

>> One of the things I like to help out in is collecting stray dogs.
which is take a walking together, feed them and advertising adopted them.

>> I want to walk them, feed them and look for a suitable home for them.

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