Day1
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It was very nice to meet you too!
Thank you for sending this to me, I think you\'re great. I will do my best to teach you! Okay? :)
Today, I have a T. Asia\'s class on 1 p.m.
>>Today, I have a class with T.Asia at 1PM.
This is my first time use Skype for the class.
>>This is mu first time to use Skype for a class.
So, I feel so good and fresh.
>>So, I feel really good and fresh.
According to the class, I think T. Asia is very kind and modest.
>>CORRECT
OR>>According to the class we had I think T.Asia is very kind and modest.
I hope learn a lot of things from her.
>>I hope to learn a lot of things from her.
Nice to meet U Asia~~
>>Nice to meet you Asia!
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