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2018-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Asia

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, I have a T. Asia's class on 1 p.m. This is my first time use Skype for the class. So, I feel so good and fresh. According to the class, I think T. Asia is very kind and modest. I hope learn a lot of things from her. Nice to meet U Asia~~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It was very nice to meet you too!

Thank you for sending this to me, I think you\'re great. I will do my best to teach you! Okay? :)

Today, I have a T. Asia\'s class on 1 p.m.

>>Today, I have a class with T.Asia at 1PM.

This is my first time use Skype for the class.

>>This is mu first time to use Skype for a class. 

So, I feel so good and fresh.

>>So, I feel really good and fresh.

According to the class, I think T. Asia is very kind and modest.

>>CORRECT

OR>>According to the class we had I think T.Asia is very kind and modest. 

I hope learn a lot of things from her.

>>I hope to learn a lot of things from her.

Nice to meet U Asia~~

>>Nice to meet you Asia!

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