Day2 - What makes you unique?

2018-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Asia

학생이 쓴 원문

Unique, another mean is special. Everybody want to special in their life. Somebody wants to be a good leader, or wants another things for them. And me, want to master three language, Chinese first, Korean second, and third English. Then, I want to learn Spanish when I have more time. If I can speak four language, maybe can makes me a great, special, and unique.

강사 첨삭

[이름] this is good. I agree with you, this makes you special.

You\'re the only person I know who wants to learn so many languages. 

You can do it! I believe in you.    

Unique, another mean is special.

>>Unique is another word that also means special.

Everybody want to special in their life.

>>Everybody wants to feel special in their life.

Somebody wants to be a good leader, or wants another things for them.

>>Some people wants to be a good leader or other things.

And me, want to master three language, Chinese first, Korean second, and third English.

>>However I want to master three languages, Chines, Korean and English. 

Then, I want to learn Spanish when I have more time.

>>Then if I have more time I want to learn Spanish.

If I can speak four language, maybe can makes me a great, special, and unique.

>>If I can speak four languages, maybe this makes me great, special and unique.

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