Ddaggi

Yesterday,I went back to school. So today,I made many freinds. In the rest time of the second class,I saw Ddaggi on my freind's desk. I borrowed her colored papers. and I made Ddaggi. Then I played Ddaggi whith '[이름] ji won'.(new friend) But I lost. I was sad.. I hope I win tomorrow!! I will make much Ddaggi.

Hi [이름] [이름]!

I want to try to make my own Ddaggi too! It sounds fun! You did well in this composition but you need to be careful with the spelling of some words such as “friend” and “with”. Keep on writing! Have a great weekend!

-Teacher Venus

Yesterday,I went back to school.

>> Correct
So today,I made many freinds.

>> So today I made many friends.
In the rest time of the second class,I saw Ddaggi on my freind's desk.

>>  During my second class, I saw a Ddaggi on my friend’s desk.
I borrowed her colored papers. and I made Ddaggi.

>> I borrowed some of her colored papers and made a Ddaggi.
>> I asked some of her colored papers and made my own Ddaggi.
Then I played Ddaggi whith '[이름] ji won'.(new friend)

>> After that, I played Ddaggi with [이름] Ji Won, my new friend.
But I lost. I was sad..

>> I lost the game and I was so sad.
I hope I win tomorrow!!

>> I hope I will win tomorrow.
I will make much Ddaggi.

>> I will make more Ddaggi!