Dea-Chun Mud festival

Good morning Mr. [Name]!

Well, thank you for sending this topic.

I already checked some information and pictures about the festival and I also read the controversy that happened during the last mud festival.

But anyway, since you said you don\'t like to join the activities and you just like watching, hopefully, you would have your avcation so you can enjoy it again. kkkk

See you this Friday and take care for now.

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Today I would like to talk about Daec-Chun mad festival. 

>> correct! (mud festival)
 Because Dae-Chun beach is located just 1 hour 30 minute form my home town.

>> Because Dae-Chun beach is located just 1 hour and 30 minutes away from my home town.
 Every last week of June Dae-Chun beach hosts an annual mad festival.

>> correct! (mud festival)
 This festival has became the well-known festival.

>> This festival has became a well-known festival. 

Every year, a tons of people visit that festival and this festival has became the landmark of the Dea-chun city.
>> Every year, tons of people visit that festival and this festival has became a landmark of  Dea-chun city.
There are so many experience place for mad most of participants are putting on Mud on their’s body and face and they can enjoy a lot of activity there.

>> There are so many places to experience mud and most participants are putting on mud on their body and face, and they can enjoy a lot of activities there.

 This festival also affect Dea-Chun city’s economic situation.

>>  This festival also affects Dea-Chun city’s economic situation.
 This festival has became very important source of income.

>> This festival has become a very important source of income.