Dear,
학생이 쓴 원문
There is an event for international student every Friday called Friday Lounge. I didn't know about this even though I've been here more than one half year. My friend gave that information to me and he said he is a staff. Last Friday I was little bit afraid to go alone that place because I have to speak English and I know only him on that meeting.
So, I asked my lab mate to come along. We went the place with tension. We found our guy and we sat down his table. There were one boy and girl on the table. The girl was from Poland and she was good at speaking English really.
My friend and I were frozen with tension at first. But we could enjoy that atmosphere soon. Next time we will be a friend and we will overcome our fear about English.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I'm happy to hear that you are now more exposed in speaking in English.
Take advantage of the opportunity of speaking in English with the people around you.
I know you can converse freely with them. Go girl!
Love,
Verna
There is an event for international student every Friday called Friday Lounge.
>>Correct
I didn't know about this even though I've been here more than one half year.
>> I didn't know about this even though I've been here for more than one year and a half.
My friend gave that information to me and he said he is a staff.
>> My friend gave me that information and he said he is a staff.
Last Friday I was little bit afraid to go alone that place because I have to speak English and I know only him on that meeting.
>>Last Friday I was a little bit afraid to go alone to that place because I have to speak English and he is the only one I know in that meeting. So, I asked my lab mate to come along.
>>Correct
We went the place with tension.
>>We went to the place with tension.
We found our guy and we sat down his table.
>>We found him and we sat around his table.
There were one boy and girl on the table.
>>There was a boy and a girl in around the table.
The girl was from Poland and she was good at speaking English really.
>>The girl was from Poland and she was really good at speaking English.
My friend and I were frozen with tension at first.
>>Correct
But we could enjoy that atmosphere soon.
>>But we soon enjoyed the atmosphere.
Next time we will be a friend and we will overcome our fear about English.
>>Next time we are going to be friends and we will overcome our fears about English.
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