dear Aurora
학생이 쓴 원문
It was nice talking to you today. I'm happy to see you again. :)
Yesterday, my mom had a operation for her slipped disc. All the family members including the kids were worried about it, but it was successful fortunately. We are so happy now. Thank God!
강사 첨삭
I\'m so happy for the success of your mom\'s operation. I\'ve heard and studied about slipped disc before, and it\'s quite a painful condition. A friend of mine has to undergo physical therapy sessions every month because of the same condition. I\'m glad though that your mom is okay. I hope she recovers soon from the operation.
See you tomorrow!
Teacher Aurora
It was nice talking to you today.
>>Correct!
I\'m happy to see you again. :)>>Correct!Yesterday, my mom had a operation for her slipped disc.
>>Correct!
All the family members including the kids were worried about it, but it was successful fortunately.
>>All the family members including the kids were worried about it, but fortunately, it was successful.
We are so happy now. Thank God!
>>Correct!
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