dear Aurora
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Hi, there.
I appreciate your effort to make a good class for me. Thank you.
One suggestion. How about talking of well-made design product? You can refer to this web page: design-milk.com. (Sorry, they are striking against cencorship now.)
I mean we can talking about good design of a chair or a house as well as the quality of a painting or a sculpture. :)
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Good morning Ms. [이름]! I really appreciate your suggestion. I think that\'s a really good idea. I wasn\'t exactly sure what kind of topics would interest you so I\'m happy to know your opinion. I tried to open the website you gave me though I guess I have to wait before their strike is lifted and I could browse through their webpage. A lot of websites are on strike today. Even the Wikipedia is on strike. So once again thanks for letting me know.
T. Aurora
Hi, there. >>Hi there,I appreciate your effort to make a good class for me.
>>Correct!
Thank you.
>>Correct!One suggestion. How about talking of well-made design product?
>>One suggestion, how about talking about well-made design products?
You can refer to this web page: design-milk.com.
>>Correct!
(Sorry, they are striking against cencorship now.) >>Correct!I mean we can talking about good design of a chair or a house as well as the quality of a painting or a sculpture. :)
>>I mean we can talk about good designs of chairs, houses as well as the quality of paintings or sculptures. :)
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