Dear beautiful jessica!!^^*
학생이 쓴 원문
The weather is very cold.
So, I wore five kinds of clothing superimposed.
It's underwear, T-shirts, shirts, vests and jacket.
Nevertheless, the cold^^;;
Last class, you gave me a question.
I will tell you in my opinion
Capital punishment is the most severe punishment,It means the death.
I think it is necessary for good citizen and scare to criminal.
However, not wishing to be executed.
I wish it never happened running.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mi [이름]..You have the idea about capital punishment. And to be honest, I do not agree with this. Maybe it is better, if the government will just impose a new law about this like lifetime imprisonment. Anyways, nice composition, see you tomorrow.
The weather is very cold.
>>>correct sentence
So, I wore five kinds of clothing superimposed.
>>>So, I wore five pieces of clothing.
It's underwear, T-shirts, shirts, vests and jacket.
>>>I wore underwear, T-shirts, shirt, vest and jacket.
Nevertheless, the cold^^;;
>>>But still, it's cold.
Last class, you gave me a question.
>>>You gave me a question form our last class.
I will tell you in my opinion
>>>I wil tell you my opinion.
Capital punishment is the most severe punishment,It means the death.
>>>Capital punishment is kiling a person who commits offensive crimes.
I think it is necessary for good citizen and scare to criminal.
>>>I think, it is necessary for the people to be a good citizen and to scare criminals.
However, not wishing to be executed.
>>>However, I don't wish someone to be executed.
I wish it never happened running.
>>>I wish it will never happen.
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