dear Camile
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I couldn't answer your call because I was traveling with one of my friends Sokcho and east sea. Coming back home now, I'm so tired. We had fun and enjoyed great food and wonderful weather. It was so exciting to travel without our husbands who are dependent on us and make us so burdened. 😻😻😻
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Miss [이름] thank you so much for sharing something about your short trip.
I think you really had a great time with them. Can\'t wait to hear more about that in our class...
Take care always and have a good night!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
I couldn\'t answer your call because I was traveling with one of my friends Sokcho and east sea.
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Coming back home now, I\'m so tired.
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We had fun and enjoyed great food and wonderful weather.
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It was so exciting to travel without our husbands who are dependent on us and make us so burdened. 😻😻😻
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