dear Chelsea
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name] I'm so fabulous to talk to you again, Chelsea. I've been hectic preparing for moving here, in Wonju, which is located in KangWon province and very close to Seoul. People here are very expecting a huge development because the capital city of Korea is already full of people as well as social infrastructure. Korean Government are trying to solve this problem by transferring some of public offices to local areas so called "Innovative Cities". Wonju I live in is one of Innovative Cities in Korea. Now 0.36 millions people live here but major and government officials are trying to booster up their citizens up to 0.65 millions. The number of students I teach is more than before I taught in Andong. However, the competition is much more serious. Even though I get paid a lot, I cannot help going to work everyday except for Sunday, including National hollidays such as Children's Day, Buddha's birthday. I'm not going to be frustrated due to that. I believe this experience will be really helpful for me someday I'll launch my own business in a dog-eat-dog world. Anyway, I'm also pleased to hear you've been doing well. Thanks a lot. See you tomorrow morning.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Mr. [이름]^^
It\'s also nice to talk to you again^^
I was very happy to hear your voice yesterday!
It\'s good to have you back!
Thank you for sending me your letter^^
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet you points.
See you later^^
~T.Chelsea
Dear [Name]
>> Dear [Name],
I\'m so fabulous to talk to you again, Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^
>> I feel so fabulous to talk to you again Chelsea.
I\'ve been hectic preparing for moving here, in Wonju, which is located in KangWon province and very close to Seoul.
>> It\'s been hectic for me preparing to move her in Wonju, which is located in Kangwon province and it\'s very close in Seoul.
People here are very expecting a huge development because the capital city of Korea is already full of people as well as social infrastructure.
>> People here are expecting a huge development because the capital city of Korea is already full of people as well as social infrastructure.
Korean Government are trying to solve this problem by transferring some of public offices to local areas so called \"Innovative Cities\".
>> The Korean government is trying to solve this problem by transferring some public offices to local areas called \"Innovative citie\".
Wonju I live in is one of Innovative Cities in Korea.
>> Wonju is one of the Innovative citied in Korea.
Now 0.36 millions people live here but major and government officials are trying to booster up their citizens up to 0.65 millions.
>> Now, 0.36 million people live here but major andd government officials are trying to boost their citizens up to 0.65 million.
The number of students I teach is more than before I taught in Andong.
>> The number of students I teach are more than before in Andong.
>> I have more students here than in Andong.
However, the competition is much more serious. >> CORRECT^^
Even though I get paid a lot, I cannot help going to work everyday except for Sunday, including National hollidays such as Children\'s Day, Buddha\'s birthday.
>> Even though I get paid a lot. I have to go to work every day except on Sunday, including National holidays such as Children\'s day, Buddha\'s birthday.
I\'m not going to be frustrated due to that.
>> CORRECT^^
I believe this experience will be really helpful for me someday I\'ll launch my own business in a dog-eat-dog world.
>> I beleive this experience will be really helpful for me someday, I\'ll launch my own business in a dog-eat-dog world.
Anyway, I\'m also pleased to hear you\'ve been doing well.
>> correct^^
Thanks a lot. See you tomorrow morning.
>> CORRECT^^
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