Dear. Christine

2011-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Christine

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Q: Do you have a balanced lifestyle? Yes I have balanced lifestyle is some exercises and meditation. At this point, I do my meditation because that's the only way I can literally survive all this euphoria. It's important to take 20~30 minutes a day to do meditation. Excercise is just help me more stronger for my body otherwise meditation is help me not only mind but body. I think stress is harmful to my balance that is why I always try to do meditation.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Thank you for your composition today. Please be guided by thye corrections provided below. Have a good day!

-. Christine-

 

Q: Do you have a balanced lifestyle?

>> Correct.
Yes I have balanced lifestyle is some exercises and meditation.

>> Yes, I have a balanced lifestyle in terms of exercises and meditation.
At this point, I do my meditation because that's the only way I can literally survive all this euphoria.

>> At this point, I do my meditation because that's the only way I can literally survive all this euphoria.

It's important to take 20~30 minutes a day to do meditation.

>> It's important to take a 20-30-minute meditation everyday.
Excercise is just help me more stronger for my body otherwise meditation is help me not only mind but body.

>>  Excercising helps me physically, whereas meditation helps me physically and mentally.
I think stress is harmful to my balance that is why I always try to do meditation.

>> I think stress is harmful to my balanced life, that is why I always try to do meditation.

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