Dear jenny.

2010-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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It was been raining during this morning. It was not heavy but windy. because of that my pants were wet while i waited the bus. How about your weekend? To me, last weekend was contrasting days. On saturday, I heard bad news from my mother. She told me, My close friend's be loved grandmother past away suddenly last friday. I was sad to hear it. So I went to funeral ceremony. I have knewn her since high school. She loves her grandmother sincerely. I consoled my friend's greif. It was sad saturday. On contrary. I went to wedding ceremony on sunday. they looked really happy. I could met the other former workers. I missed them. It has been a long time to meet them since I quit the job. I was happy on sunday.

강사 첨삭

[이름], When I was reading your composition, I thought it was a bittersweet weekend. It was bitter and sad because your friend’s dear grandmother passed away and you know that your friend is really sad. On the other hand, you were happy the next day. I guess in life, we really don’t know what we’re going to get. Sometimes it’s full of suffering and grief and most of the time full of hope and happiness. It’s pretty normal I guess. It’s what makes life challenging and worth living. I hope you enjoy every minute of it. ^^   XOXO, Jenny   Here is the correction: It was been raining during this morning. >>It rained this morning. It was not heavy but windy. >>It wasn’t heavy but it was windy.because of that my pants were wet while i waited the bus. >> Because of that, my pants got wet while I waited for my bus. How about your weekend? >>How was your weekend? To me, last weekend was contrasting days. >> I had a bittersweet weekend. On saturday, I heard bad news from my mother. >> Last Saturday, I heard a bad news from my mother. She told me, My close friend's be loved grandmother past away suddenly last friday. >>She told me that by close friend’s beloved grandmother suddenly passed away last Friday.  I was sad to hear it. So I went to funeral ceremony. >>I was so had and sorry to hear it so I went to the funeral ceremony.  I have knewn her since high school. She loves her grandmother sincerely. >>I have known my friend since high school and I know that she loves her grandmother dearly.  I consoled my friend's greif. >>I consoled my friend and tried to ease her grief.  It was sad saturday. >> It was a sad Saturday.On contrary. I went to wedding ceremony on sunday. they looked really happy. >>On the other hand, I attended a wedding ceremony last Sunday and all the people looked really happy. I could met the other former workers. >>I was able to meet former co-workers.  I missed them. It has been a long time to meet them since I quit the job. >> I missed then since it has been a long time since I’ve seen them. The last was before I quit my job.  I was happy on sunday. >> I was so happy last Sunday.    

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