dear jenny.

2010-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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good night. jenny~ first of all. i am so sorry about change my class time without any notice. during the last week, i thought that i need to change my time for class. i wanted to study with you continuesly, but sadly, you're schedule didn't fit with my require. so there was no way to keep our class. after made a dicision, i tried to say you about it in my composition, but i was so busy so couldn't leave any message to you. as soon as i reached my home, i am writing my apologize for you. please understand me.~ and i hope to meet you again. take you're self until we meet again.~

강사 첨삭

[이름], Yesterday, I found out about it. I was kind of sad but then, I know that is for your own good. I always tell my students that their convenience is the most important thing. I believe you will be able to learn and concentrate more if you feel comfortable and relaxed. I had great times conversing with you in the past months and I will always remember them. ;) I hope you have a great time with your new class and stay as kind and as cheerful as you are. Kudos and until we meet again! Be safe as always!   XOXO, Jenny good night. jenny~ >> Good evening, Jenny.first of all. i am so sorry about change my class time without any notice. >>First of all, I am sorry that I changed my class schedule without informing you. during the last week, i thought that i need to change my time for class. >> In the past weeks, I thought I needed to change my class time. i wanted to study with you continuesly, but sadly, you're schedule didn't fit with my require. >> I wanted to study with you continuously, but sadly, your schedule doesn’t fit my availability. so there was no way to keep our class. >> So, there was no way for us to keep the class. after made a dicision, i tried to say you about it in my composition, but i was so busy so couldn't leave any message to you. >> When I made a decision, I was supposed to tell your through my composition but I was so busy that I wasn’t able to leave any message to you. as soon as i reached my home, i am writing my apologize for you. >> As soon as I reached home today, I wrote this to apologize to you. please understand me.~ and i hope to meet you again. >>Please understand me and I hope to meet you again.  take you're self until we meet again.~ >>Take care of yourself until we meet again.

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