Dear. jessica~
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Children who has pneumonia.
All of them actually have pneumonia.
They were have high grade fever.
They will experience seizure.
It's very hard actually to deal with children.
I made a sentence -> I am very hard to deal with my boyfriend.
Is this I understanded "hard to deal with" what it is mean?
At first I didn't know I can call it e-mail.
(But now I knew. But I knew ^^!!)
So I do not receive the email said. Hehehe ...
I will preparing homework^^
Have a nice weekand!!
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Hi, Min [이름].Oh , yes most of our patients have penumonia case. And sometimes, it's so hard to assess kids because they easily get irritated. That's why as a nurse, patience is very important especially in dealing with kids.
See you ,Mi [이름]!
Children who has pneumonia.
>>>Children who have pneumonia are having chest pain and difficulty of breathing.
>>>(your sentence has incomplete thought)
All of them actually have pneumonia.
>>>All of them actually has pneumonia.
They were have high grade fever.
>>>They have high grade fever.
They will experience seizure.
>>>They will also experience seizure.
It's very hard actually to deal with children.
>>>>correct sentence
I made a sentence -> I am very hard to deal with my boyfriend.
>>>Its so hard for me to deal with my boyfriend.
Is this I understanded "hard to deal with" what it is mean?
>>>Is this what I understood?Hard to deal with? What do we mean by that phrase?
>>>Hard to deal means hard to get along with or so difficult to communicate with someone
At first I didn't know I can call it e-mail.
>>>At first, I didn't know that I can call it as an E-mail.
(But now I knew. But I knew ^^!!)
>>>correct sentence
So I do not receive the email said. Hehehe ...
>>>So I said that I did not receive an email from you.Hehehe!
I will preparing homework^^
>>>I will prepare my homework.
Have a nice weekand!!
>>>Have a nice weekend.
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