Dear, Julie

2011-03-28 · 첨삭 강사 Julie

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear, Julie Today I want to tell you that I'm so sorry about your friend's death. I guess you feel very sad and heartbroken and I thank you for having a class with readiness for me despite your deep sorrow. I really appreciate it. Hopefully you get over your sadness soon. I guess your friend in heaven wants his remaining family, friends, and neighbors to overcome this hard time well and live a happy life. Plus I hope that it will take not so long to arrest the suspect. I think if the person is proved guilty, he/she should be strictly punished for preventing this bad crime from happening again. Have a good day and talk to you in the evening. :D

강사 첨삭

My dear [이름],      Thank you for your sympathy. I appreciate your kindness and understanding. I'm missing my friend but I know that life must go on. Like what you said I think that's what my friend wants. See you later. xoxo, Julie~~ Dear, Julie >> Dear [Name],Today I want to tell you that I'm so sorry about your friend's death. >> Correct I guess you feel very sad and heartbroken and I thank you for having a class with readiness for me despite your deep sorrow. I really appreciate it. >>CorrectHopefully, you get over your sadness soon. I guess your friend in heaven wants his remaining family, friends, and neighbors to overcome this hard time well and live a happy life.>> CorrectPlus I hope that it will take not so long to arrest the suspect. I think if the person is proved guilty, he/she should be strictly punished for preventing this bad crime from happening again.>> Plus, I hope that it won't so long to arrest the suspect. I think if the person is proven guilty, he/she should be strictly punished for preventing this bad crime from happening again.Have a good day and talk to you in the evening. :D >>Correct

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