Dear lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning. Lei.~
i've heard that you had sicked yesterday. are you ok? take care yourself. health is the best one in our life.
i hope to meet you again soon at our class. sadly, i have recoginized that i had not bought my cell phone. ㅠ ㅠ i wanted to talk about our last holiday. due to it i postponed our class today.
i left my picture at review page that i took it when i went to the daffodil field. i wanted to show it to you.
have a great day.~
see you tommorrow.~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Thank you so much for your concern. But don’t worry I’m fine now. Yeah, I saw your picture on our website. It was beautiful. I am actually jealous because I like daffodils. You’re so lucky. Yes, we will talk about this during our class. Stay happy!! I miss you [이름]!!
Lei J
Good morning. Lei.~
>>correcti've heard that you had sicked yesterday.
>>I heard that you got sick yesterday.
are you ok? take care yourself.
>>correct
health is the best one in our life.
>>Being healthy is very importanti hope to meet you again soon at our class.
>>I hope to talk to you again
sadly, i have recoginized that i had not bought my cell phone.
>>Sadly, I realized that I left my phone.
ㅠ ㅠ i wanted to talk about our last holiday.
>>correct
due to it i postponed our class today.
>>Because of it, I have to postpone our class today.i left my picture at review page that i took it when i went to the daffodil field.
>>I posted a picture at the review page. I took it when I went to the daffodil field.
i wanted to show it to you.
>>correcthave a great day.~
>>correctsee you tommorrow.~
>>correct
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