Dear lei.~

2010-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 lei

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning. Lei.~ i've heard that you had sicked yesterday. are you ok? take care yourself. health is the best one in our life. i hope to meet you again soon at our class. sadly, i have recoginized that i had not bought my cell phone. ㅠ ㅠ i wanted to talk about our last holiday. due to it i postponed our class today. i left my picture at review page that i took it when i went to the daffodil field. i wanted to show it to you. have a great day.~ see you tommorrow.~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Thank you so much for your concern. But don’t worry I’m fine now. Yeah, I saw your picture on our website. It was beautiful. I am actually jealous because I like daffodils. You’re so lucky. Yes, we will talk about this during our class. Stay happy!! I miss you [이름]!! Lei J   Good morning. Lei.~ >>correcti've heard that you had sicked yesterday. >>I heard that you got sick yesterday. are you ok? take care yourself. >>correct health is the best one in our life. >>Being healthy is very importanti hope to meet you again soon at our class. >>I hope to talk to you again sadly, i have recoginized that i had not bought my cell phone. >>Sadly, I realized that I left my phone. ㅠ ㅠ i wanted to talk about our last holiday. >>correct due to it i postponed our class today. >>Because of it, I have to postpone our class today.i left my picture at review page that i took it when i went to the daffodil field. >>I posted a picture at the review page. I took it when I went to the daffodil field. i wanted to show it to you. >>correcthave a great day.~ >>correctsee you tommorrow.~ >>correct

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