Dear lei.~
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi
[이름]!!
I am really sorry to hear that you are still suffering from stomachache. I hope
tomorrow you will be feeling better. Anyways, I got curious about your secret
recipe. I wish I could taste it one day. See you tomorrow. Take care!!
Lei J
Good afternoon.~
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first, i am sorry for yesterday.
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>>I’m sorry about yesterday
while you were calling me, i didn't realize the time and i also left my cell phone.
>>the time that you called me, I didn’t realize that it’s tome for our class and that I left my phone
so i couldn't hear the ring. sorry.~
>>so I was not able to hear it
ringing
while that time, i made a lunch box for my close person.
>>During that time, I making a lunch box for a close friend
she is my mother's friend.
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she is going to picnic.
>>she’s going to a picnic
i made a kimbob too.
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she has a special recipe of kimbob.
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while made kimbob she taught me the recipe.
>>While making kimbob, she taught me the recipe
it was really really delicious.
>>correct
she told me never let other know the recipe.
>>she told me not share the recipe to other people
because it's a she's secret recipe.
>>because it’s a secret recipe
anyways, i skipped my breakfast and lunch.
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because i have a trouble with my stomach.
>>correct
my boss advised to me, the best way to improve my stomache is fasting.
>>my boss gave an advise how to take care of my stomachache
even if i hungry now. i am standing my hunger.
>>Even if I’m hungry now, I should try my best not eat
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