Dear lei.~

2010-05-06 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good afternoon.~ first, i am sorry for yesterday. while you were calling me, i didn't realize the time and i also left my cell phone. so i couldn't hear the ring. sorry.~ while that time, i made a lunch box for my close person. she is my mother's friend. she is going to picnic. i made a kimbob too. she has a special recipe of kimbob. while made kimbob she taught me the recipe. it was really really delicious. she told me never let other know the recipe. because it's a she's secret recipe. anyways, i skiped my breakfast and lunch. because i have a trouble with my stomache. my boss advised to me, the best way to improve my stomache is fasting. even if i hungry now. i am standing my hunger.

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Hi [이름]!!
I am really sorry to hear that you are still suffering from stomachache. I hope tomorrow you will be feeling better. Anyways, I got curious about your secret recipe. I wish I could taste it one day. See you tomorrow. Take care!!

Lei J

 

Good afternoon.~

>>correct
first, i am sorry for yesterday.

>>correct

>>I’m sorry about yesterday

while you were calling me, i didn't realize the time and i also left my cell phone.

>>the time that you called me, I didn’t realize that it’s tome for our class and that I left my phone

so i couldn't hear the ring. sorry.~
>>so I was not able to hear it ringing

while that time, i made a lunch box for my close person.

>>During that time, I making a lunch box for a close friend

she is my mother's friend.

>>correct

she is going to picnic.

>>she’s going to a picnic

i made a kimbob too.
>>correct

she has a special recipe of kimbob.

>>correct

while made kimbob she taught me the recipe.

>>While making kimbob, she taught me the recipe

it was really really delicious.

>>correct

she told me never let other know the recipe.

>>she told me not share the recipe to other people

because it's a she's secret recipe.

>>because it’s a secret recipe
anyways, i skipped my breakfast and lunch.

>>correct

because i have a trouble with my stomach.

>>correct

my boss advised to me, the best way to improve my stomache is fasting.

>>my boss gave an advise how to take care of my stomachache

even if i hungry now. i am standing my hunger.

>>Even if I’m hungry now, I should try my best not eat

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