Dear lei.

2010-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

good morning. lei.~ it's already half of a week.^ ^ i searched maitre island. wow. as soon as i saw the photo, i thought that it's very familiar looking. yes, i remember it. i watched Korean Drama which name is Boys over flowers. and i saw the island. it must be paradise! and i learned it is a land of France which are located near the Australia. after the Drama was brodcasted, the island became famous in Korea. and many couple who've got just maried went to the island for their honey moon. i think it might have such a beautiful place in the Philipinnes. too. isn't it? if i have a chance to visit there i think i will be happy. ^ ^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Yeah, you're right! I saw that island from the Korean drama. It is such a wonderful place and I hope to see it one day. Wow. So I think it will be added to the list of places that you will be visiting in the future. I am so excited to talk about it later during our class. So, see you later!! Lei :-) good morning. lei.~  >>correctit's already half of a week.^ ^>>its already the halfway of the week i searched maitre island. wow.  >>correctas soon as i saw the photo, i thought that it really looks familiar.  >>correct yes, i remember it.  >>correct i watched a Korean Drama titled is Boys over flowers.  >> I watched a Korean Drama entitled Boys over flowers. and i saw the island. >>correct it must be paradise! >> it must be a paradise! and i learned that this is a land of France which are located near the Australia. >> And I learned that t his is a land of France which is located near Australia. after the Drama was broadcasted, the island became famous in Korea.>>correct and many couple who got just married went to the island for their honey moon. >> And many couples who just got married went to the island for their honeymoon. i think it might have such a beautiful place in the Philippines. too. isn't it?>> I think there are such beautiful places in the Philippines, too. Isn't it? if i have a chance to visit there i think i will be happy. ^ ^ >>correct

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