Dear lei.

2010-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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but unfortunetly, the M.C anounced No.2 and No.3 ㅠ ㅠ so i was not able get any award. after the party my friends and me went to cafeteria. we had red bean sherbet. one of my freind became a police official. for commemorate it he bought it to us. i forgot the happening which one happend last friday. .

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but unfortunetly, the M.C anounced No.2 and No.3 ㅠ ㅠ >>correctso i was not able get any award.  >>correctafter the party my friends and me went to cafeteria.  >>correct we had red bean sherbet.  >>correct one of my friends became a police official.  >>correct for commemorate it he bought it to us.  >>to celebrate it, he bought red bean sherbet for us. i forgot the happening which one happend last friday.. >>I forgot what happened last Friday.

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