Dear lei.
학생이 쓴 원문
good morning. lei.~
i am back to my life. yes. my summer vacation over.
so i woke up at around 5:50 AM. and i prepared for working.
i took a bus at around 6:30 AM. i started my work from 8 o'clock.
it was hard to fall in a sleep last night.
for sleeping, i read a book. and i counted sheep!
maybe with fear about back to life, i was not able to sleep.
but, i am OK.
during the morning. i made a report and i am making another report.
and also, i heard the story about my boss's summer vacation.
during the summer vacation, my boss went to Dok-Do and Ul-reung island. i've been told you about Dok-Do. it is very small island in Korea. but Japan insists it is their land.
you told about the same situation you're country and China.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!!!Thank you for passing a composition today. I made some corrections for your grammar. I noticed that you had this mistakes before. Try to check this corrections and practice not to have the same mistakes in the future. Practice makes it perfect as they say. Anyways I am excited to talk to you!!! See you.
Lei :-)
good morning. lei.~
>>correct^^i am back to my life.
>>I am back to my old life.
yes. my summer vacation over.>>yes my summer vacation is over.
so i woke up at around 5:50 AM.
>>correct^^
and i prepared for working. >>and I prepared for work.
i took a bus at around 6:30 AM.
>>correct^^
i started my work from 8 o'clock.>>correct^^
it was hard to fall in a sleep last night.>>I had a hard time going to sleep last night.
for sleeping, i read a book.
>>for me to fall asleep, I tried to read a book.
and i counted sheep!>>and I tried counting sheeps too.
maybe with fear about back to life, i was not able to sleep.>>amybe I was afraid to go back to my old routine that I was not able to sleep.
but, i am OK.>>correct^^during the morning. i made a report and i am making another report.>>this morning, i made a report and i am currently another report.
and also, i heard the story about my boss's summer vacation.>>correct^^
during the summer vacation, my boss went to Dok-Do and Ul-reung island.
>>correct^^
i've been told you about Dok-Do.
>>I told you about dok-do before.
it is a very small island in Korea.
>>correct^^
but Japan insists it is their land. >>but Japan is insisting that it is their island.
you told me about the same situation you're country and China.
>>correct^^
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