Dear lei.

2010-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good afternoon. lei. how are you today? i am still just a little bit tired. but don't worry i am better than yesterday. it's finally friday. wow but i have to study for my test. i have a test this sunday. so i am going to study and study during this saturday. and also this sunday is very important day to Korean. it is a kwang bok jeol. it is anniversary day of freedom from colony. during the world war 2. Korea was under the rule of Janpan during 36 years. it is very shame history to Korean. we were treated as Japan's labor. and after nuclear explosion to Japan from America, Japan surrendar to the war. and then we were released from colony. it was 15, august 1946.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!! Wow thank you so much for the FYI!! You have here a very interesting composition. keep it up. Good luck with your test. I hope you'll perfect it. ^^ Lei :-) Good afternoon. lei. >>correcthow are you today?>>correct i am still just a little bit tired.  >>I am feeling a bit tired. but don't worry i am better than yesterday.>>but don't worry I am feeling better today than yesterday. it's finally friday. wow>>correct but i have to study for my test.  >>correct i have a test this sunday.>>correct so i am going to study and study during this Saturday.>>so I am going to study hard this Saturday. and also this sunday is very important day to Korean.>>and also, this Sunday is an important day to Koreans. it is kwang bok jeol.  >>correct it is anniversary day of freedom from colony.>>It is the commemoration of our freedom. during the world war 2.  >>correct Korea was under the rule of Japan for 36 years. >>correct it is very shame history to Korean.  >>It's a shame to Korean's history. we were treated as Japan's labor.>>we were treated as slaves by Japan. and after nuclear explosion to Japan from America, Japan surrender to the war.  >>and after the nuclear explosion in Japan, led by the Americans, Japan finally surrendered. and then we were released from the colony. >>correct it was 15, august 1946. >>correct

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