Dear lei.~

2010-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 1011

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon. it is the first fine weather in this week. Most of last day were cloudy or raining. In Korea, the end of March is spring. but I heard it was snow in Seoul last Tuesday, it's unusual. I thinnk it was due to global warming. Global warning bring out abnormal climate changes. in spite of recurrence of cold, spring is coming and spring flowers are blossom here and there. I like tree and flower, plant. for this reason, my favorite season is spring. I wonder that in your country has spring. if it has not, i suggest that you would have a oppotunity to experience Korea's amazing spring season.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Oh I was so happy reading your composition because I have a chance to imagine the spring season, even though we don’t have it here in the Philippines. I hope that you will enjoy this time of the year. You are really excited, right? Well, I hope that you will enjoy it.. Take care always…^^   Good Afternoon >> correct. ^^,   It is the first fine weather in this week. >> It was a great weather this week.   Most of last day were cloudy or raining. >> On the later part of the day it was cloudy and it rains.   In Korea, the end of March is spring. >> In Korea, in the last week of March it will be spring already.   but I heard it was snow in Seoul last Tuesday, it's unusual. >> But, I heard that it was snowing in Seoul last Tuesday and that is unusual.   I thinnk it was due to global warming. >> I think it was a result of the global warming.   Global warning bring out abnormal climate changes. >> Global warming can result to abnormal climate change.   in spite of recurrence of cold, spring is coming and spring flowers are blossom here and there. >> In spite of the cold weather, spring is fast approaching and during spring you can see flowers which bloom.   I like tree and flower, plant. >> I like trees, flowers and plants.   for this reason, my favorite season is spring. >> Of all the seasons, my favorite season is spring.   I wonder that in your country has spring. >> I wonder if you experience spring in you country.   if it has not, i suggest that you would have a oppotunity to experience Korea's amazing spring season. >> If you don’t have, I hope that you would have an opportunity to experience Korea’s spring time.

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