Dear.Michelle

EDUCATION: 2010.10~2011.02 Studied at – EF language school in USA 2006~ Present at Hankyung University, Korea Major in Horticulture 2008~2009 Applied for leave of absence EXPERIENCE: Mar. 2007 Private Lesson of English for Junior high school group A teacher of English ■ Teach conversation English and phonetic. ■ Thought English to children. ACTIVITIES: ■ A member of Jazz dance club ■ At University: took a part in campus festival Special Achievement: ■ Certificate of Completion – Cebu Pacific International Language School ■ Certificate of Completion Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation ■ Teach yoga REFERENCES : Available on request

Hi, [이름].I want you to arrange this part from the present to the past and we might as well disregard the period when you apllied for leave. EDUCATION:Major in HorticultureHankyung University, Korea2006 toPresent   Major in HorticultureHankyung University, Korea2006 toPresent   EXPERIENCE:Private Tutor for English Classses for Junior High School GroupMarch 2007   English TeacherTaught English conversation and phonetics.Taught English to children.   Yoga TeacherTaught yoga in Ceby, Philippines   ACTIVITIES: A member of a Jazz dance clubTook a part in campus festival in university   Special Achievements:Certificate of Completion in  Cebu Pacific International Language SchoolCertificate of Completion Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation   Teacher MichelleHere are some corrections for you:EDUCATION:>>Correct2010.10~2011.02 Studied at – EF language school in USA>>Language Schoool in the USAOctober 2010 to February 20112006~ Present at Hankyung University, Korea >>CorrectMajor in Horticulture >>Major in HorticultureHankyung University, Korea2006 to Present2008~2009 Applied for leave of absence>>CorrectEXPERIENCE:>>CorrectMar. 2007 Private Lesson of English for Junior high school group>>March 2007 Private Lesson for English for Junior High School GroupA teacher of English >>English TeacherTeach conversation English and phonetic.>>Taught English conversation and phonetics.Thought English to children.>>Taught English to children.ACTIVITIES:>>CorrectA member of Jazz dance club>>A member of a Jazz dance clubAt University: took a part in campus festival>>Took a part in campus festival in universitySpecial Achievement:>>Special Achievements:Certificate of Completion – Cebu Pacific International Language School>>Certificate of Completion in  Cebu Pacific International Language SchoolCertificate of Completion Cardiopulmonary Resuscitation>>Certificate of Completion Cardiopulmonary ResuscitationTeach yoga>>taught YogaREFERENCES >>Correct: Available on request >>Correct