Dear.Mom
학생이 쓴 원문
How are you today? Mom, I'm pretty well here
I'm already used to be new school and boarding house
But there is one problem that I don't like my room-mate.
I know that it's not easy to live together two strangers,
because we've been grow up totally different situation and place.
However,she doesn't understand it.she wants me change my lifestyle as her way that she wants to.
I understand hers but I don't want to change my lifestyle.
By the way I'll let you know more about my life here later
Love you mom and take care
from [이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sending a composition for me to check. You can write really well and I love the way you express your thoughts. Feel free to send more compositions for me to check because I'd be glad to read and check them as well. Have a good day!
Jane
How are you today? Mom, I'm pretty well here
>> How are you today? Mom, I'm doing pretty well here.
I'm already used to be new school and boarding house
>> I'm already familiar with my new school and my boarding house.
But there is one problem that I don't like my room-mate.
>> But there is one problem-- I don't like my roommate.
I know that it's not easy to live together two strangers, because we've been grow up totally different situation and place.
>> I know that it's not easy to live with a stranger, because we grew up with totally different situation and place.
However,she doesn't understand it.
>> correct
she wants me change my lifestyle as her way that she wants to.
>> She wants me to change my lifestyle.
By the way I'll let you know more about my life here later
>> correct
Love you mom and take care
>> correct
Thank you for sending a composition for me to check. You can write really well and I love the way you express your thoughts. Feel free to send more compositions for me to check because I'd be glad to read and check them as well. Have a good day!
Jane
How are you today? Mom, I'm pretty well here
>> How are you today? Mom, I'm doing pretty well here.
I'm already used to be new school and boarding house
>> I'm already familiar with my new school and my boarding house.
But there is one problem that I don't like my room-mate.
>> But there is one problem-- I don't like my roommate.
I know that it's not easy to live together two strangers, because we've been grow up totally different situation and place.
>> I know that it's not easy to live with a stranger, because we grew up with totally different situation and place.
However,she doesn't understand it.
>> correct
she wants me change my lifestyle as her way that she wants to.
>> She wants me to change my lifestyle.
By the way I'll let you know more about my life here later
>> correct
Love you mom and take care
>> correct
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