Dear my baby
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I went to play yoga, for relaxing my body.
It is very good for my health, so I try to be present every weekend.
Sometimes, it is boring. But I am very happy whenever I feel your prenatal movement.
My baby, please be good personality and healthy.
there are many important things in your life. In my life, you are best wishes in my life.
강사 첨삭
What a sweet and caring words from a soon-to-be mother.
Watch and listen to children’s shows and music often. Read children’s stories, too. Take extra care of yourself, Miss. [Name].
Dear my baby,
>>Dear, my baby,
>>My dear baby,
Today, I went to play yoga, for relaxing my body.
>>I attended yoga for pregnant women today to relax my body.
It is very good for my health, so I try to be present every weekend.
>>correct
Sometimes, it is boring.
>>correct
But I am very happy whenever I feel your prenatal movement.
>>But whenever I feel you moving inside, I am inspired and happy to do it.
My baby, please be good personality and healthy.
>>My baby, please be a healthy and good baby when you come out in this world.
there are many important things in your life.
>>There are a lot of important things waiting for you in this so called LIFE.
In my life, you are best wishes in my life.
>>You are the greatest gift in my life.
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