Dear my good teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Penny,
Thank you for your message. ^^ I am glad that you were shortlisted for an interview with Singapore Airlines. I wish you luck with it. ^^
By the way, let me correct the grammar of your message okay? It will help you more.
YOUR MESSAGE:
Hello teacher
I was very tired yesterday so,I could not help delaying our class
I was given to a digital interview from Singapore airlines yesterday. I am so happy I am going to prepare for it on my best from now,I glad that I can provid you with good news today.
Today I came to home early so I want to call you ealier than normal class\'s time. Very very thank you teacher. I think that this interview is certainly thanks to your feedback.:)))))
CORRECTIONS:
Hello teacher,
I was very tired yesterday so, I could not help but to delay our class.
I was given a digital interview from Singapore airlines yesterday so, I am very happy. I am going to prepare my best for it from now on. I am glad that I can share good news with you today.
Today, I came home early so, I want to call you earlier than the normal class time. I thank you very much teacher. I think that this interview is certain. Thanks for your feedback.:)))))
**Hi Penny, please take note of the corrections okay? See you soon. ^^
T. Alexia
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