Dear my grace teacher :)♡

2012-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Teacher I want to write a letter to you yesterday. But, I didn't know where write it. So I asked a question on website. Then I can write a letter to you now. The temperature is fluctuating a lot recently, so be careful not to catch a cold. And... I heard yesterday that you will retire December 7th. I was very surprised. I want to know why you think to retire but, i am able to know that soon. I will miss you :(.. when you can come back here, you will do please. If I know this website page, I could have wrote before. Maybe I wrote many wrong sentence. Please change the right sentence. After two hours we have class. See you soon Grace:)

강사 첨삭

Hello Mia! WOW! I am really happy to receive a letter from you, this is the first time! ^^ Well, I am also saddened because I am leaving you in less than a month. I decided to leave the company because I want to prepare for my next year\'s plan. ^.^ I\'ll go back to school next year because I want to be a lawyer. Another reason is, I have to take care of my son and so I want to focus on his growth as a toddler...he\'s also going to school next year. ^^ Anyway, I believe that you will be a great English communicator in no time. I can see your improvement. Your strongest point is your VOCABULARY skill but you also have to improve your GRAMMAR point. Mia, thank you for being a friend to me. I will surely miss you. Let\'s have quality time everyday, okay...^^ See you later! Cheerios! teacher GRACE ^__^ Teacher I want to write a letter to you yesterday.But, I didn\'t know where write it. So I asked a question on website.Then I can write a letter to you now.>> Teacher I wanted to write you a letter last night but I didn\'t know where to place it. I asked then a few questions on the website so now I have this letter for you.The temperature is fluctuating a lot recently, so be careful not to catch a cold. And...>> The temperature is fluctuating nowadays. >> OR: The temperature is changing from time to time so be careful so that you\'ll not catch a cold.I heard yesterday that you will retire December 7th. >> I heard last night that you will be resigning  on December 7th.I was very surprised. >> CorrectI want to know why you think to retire but, i am able to know that soon. >> I want to know why you are leaving. Anyway, I will know that soon.I will miss you :(.. when you can come back here, you will do please.>> I will miss you. ;(  Please come back.If I know this website page, I could have wrote before. >> If only I knew this page, I could have written letters before.Maybe I wrote many wrong sentence. Please change the right sentence. >> Perhaps I wrote many wrong sentences, please make some corrections for me.After two hours we have class. See you soon Grace:) >>  After two hours we\'re going to have a class. See you soon Grace. =)

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