Dear. my tearcher
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! I'm [이름], I'm sorry to delay our class again. So I'm writing a letter to you. Today, I'll participate in mini conference in our hospital and education class for new employees. I'm not a busy person, but my company makes me busy. I'm so sorry frequently to delay class and forgetting homework. And I have one more reason, that is, I'm going to go to the department store where I visited yesterday and bought something, but that has a problem, so I need to change this one to other. So I have more jobs that I have to do. Anyway,I'll solve these problems well, then, I expect to see you tomorrow.
See you~
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I'm sorry to hear that you cannot attend our class but I understand.
I just hope that you will have time to seat back and relax. I'm excited to see you tomorrow!
Take care!
Hi! I'm [이름], I'm sorry to delay our class again.
>> Correct
So I'm writing a letter to you.
>> Correct
>> So I'm writing a letter for you. (better)
Today, I'll participate in mini conference in our hospital and education class for new employees.
>> Today, I'll participate in a mini conference in our hospital and education class for new employees.
I'm not a busy person, but my company makes me busy.
>>Correct
I'm so sorry frequently to delay class and forgetting homework.
>> So I frequently delay my class and I forget to do my homework.
And I have one more reason, that is, I'm going to go to the department store where I visited yesterday and bought something, but that has a problem, so I need to change this one to other.
>> And I have another reason, I'm going back to the department store where I visited yesterday.I bought something and there was a problem so I need to exchange to a new one.
So I have more jobs that I have to do.
>>So I have a lot of things to do.
Anyway,I'll solve these problems well, then, I expect to see you tomorrow.
>>Anyway,I'll solve these problems. Well then, I expect to see you tomorrow.See you~
>>Correct
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