Dear [Name] 1

2017-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! I caught a cold. Here in Korea is cold now.Sometimes cold but sometimes hot.It's really boring.School's food is really tasty.And I like reading comic books.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] the great! ^^

I\'m sad to know you caught a cold.

I hope you get well soon.

Take a rest well. Tell me about reading comic books.

Have a good night!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^

   

Hi! I caught a cold.

>> correct

Here in Korea is cold now.

>> It is cold in Korea now.

Sometimes cold but sometimes hot.

>> Sometimes it\'s cold, but sometimes it\'s hot.

It\'s really boring.

>> correct

School\'s food is really tasty.

>> correct

And I like reading comic books.

>> correct

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