Dear [Name]

2020-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I will make a letter to my boss in the end of this year. so please check my composition and correct. Dear [Name], Thank you for your kind suports. Already, it is the end of 2020. I never thought that I have worked at Werfen Korea. but I do now. Thank you for giving me a chance to work this company. I was in Werfen for almost one year. I did my best to understand Werfen system and policy and I did my best to care endusers according to your mention of interview in early of this year. but because of Covid19, it was difficult to do. Regarding English skill, still not enough. I do practics to speak and listen English with company supports. Someday, I will talk to you in English fruently. I hope your safety and heahthy and Happy New Year 2021.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]

Will try my best for this letter to your boss. See you later.

Dear [Name],

I will make a letter to my boss in the end of this year. so please check my composition and correct.

>> I will make a letter to my boss in the end of this year. so please check my composition and make some corrections.

Dear [Name],

Thank you for your kind suports.

>> Thank you for your kindness and support or Thank you for being so kind and being supportive to me.

Already, it is the end of 2020. I never thought that I have worked at Werfen Korea. but I do now.

>> It is already the end of 2020 or 2020 is coming to and end. I never thought that I will work at Werfen Korea and it is a year now since I started and I am still here.

Thank you for giving me a chance to work this company.

>> Thank you and I appreciate you for giving me a chance to work in your company.

I was in Werfen for almost one year. I did my best to understand Werfen system and policy and I did my best to care endusers according to your mention of interview in early of this year. but because of Covid19, it was difficult to do.

>> I am in Werfen for almost one year now. I did my best to understand and follow Werfen systems and policies as well as to take care and satisfy my end users, which I did and will continue to do so. This is what I promised when you interviewed me early this year but unfortunately, because of Covid 19, it is difficult to come face to face with my end users. Despite this, I assure you that I am taking care of them and are pleased with what I am doing.

Regarding English skill, still not enough. I do practics to speak and listen English with company supports.

>> Regarding my English skills, which is still not enough but improving. I do make sure that I practice hard to speak and listen to English speakers that are tied up in our company.

Someday, I will talk to you in English fruently.

>> Someday or time will come that I will talk to you in English fluently.

I hope your safety and heahthy and Happy New Year 2021.

>> I hope for your safety and good health. Happy New Year and happy 2021 to you.

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