Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Today I still had a lot of mistakes during the lesson.
One of the most memorable mistakes was that I said “Hai” the time when I say “yes”.
I often make a same mistake because “Hai” in Japanese means “yes”.
Whenever I did, I am very embarrassed.
Two years ago, since I have begun to learn Japanese for the first time, I seem to easily forget English. If I memorize one Japanese word, I seem to forget ten English word.
When I think about something, first of all Japanese sentence occur to me.
The next is Korean. And that’s the end. It is a big problem.
So, after I began phone-english lesson, I’m always trying to make an English sentence every time.
From next time I hope I will not make a same mistake.
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
Making mistakes are very good opportunities for learnig. If you can recognize your own mistakes then you know how to fix it. In this way you can easily learn and you can also learn faster. The secret of learning multiple languages is to forget every other languages that you know and then focus on the language you are trying to study at that moment. Try to think in English if you are trying to say something in English. Think in Japanese if you are talking with a Japanese friend. It is very easy for you to talk in Korean because it is your Mother Language! This time, you have to be more flexible in shifting from Korean to Japanese to English. I know you can do it because I believe in you! Take care!
Sincerely yours,T. Lirah
Dear [Name],>>Correct.Today I still had a lot of mistakes during the lesson.>>Correct.>>Today I still had a lot of mistakes during our class. -- betterOne of the most memorable mistakes was that I said “Hai” the time when I say “yes”.>>One of my most memorable mistakes was that I said “Hai” when I'm supposed to say “yes”.I often make a same mistake because “Hai” in Japanese means “yes”.>>I often make the same mistake because “Hai” in Japanese means “yes”.Whenever I did, I am very embarrassed.>>Whenever I do, I am very embarrassed.>>Whenever I commit the same mistake, I feel embarrassed. -- betterTwo years ago, since I have begun to learn Japanese for the first time, I seem to easily forget English. >>Two years ago, since I have begun to learn Japanese for the first time, I seem to forget English easily. If I memorize one Japanese word, I seem to forget ten English word.>>If I memorize one Japanese word, I seem to forget ten English words.When I think about something, first of all Japanese sentence occur to me.>>Correct.>>When I think about something, first of all I always thought of a Japanese sentence. -- betterThe next is Korean. And that’s the end. It is a big problem.>>Then the next sentence would be Korean and then that's the end of it. It is a big problem for me in learning English.So, after I began phone-english lesson, I’m always trying to make an English sentence every time.>>So after I began phone-english lessons, I always try to make an English sentence every time.From next time I hope I will not make a same mistake. >>Next time I hope I will not make the same mistake again.
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