Dear [Name],

2010-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 lirah

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I'd like to tell you about Japanese climate, especially a rainy season called TSUYU. In Japan, it becomes a rainy season from May to July every year.Of course, there is this kind of season in Korea, called JANGMA. How about Philippine? It rains for 3-4 days a week. And we need a strong umbrella and a RAINBOOTS because the wind is getting heavy. Last year I didn't have those items. It was hard time without them. Therefore, I will buy them this year no matter what. By the way, it comes faster than Korea and last longer. In this season, It is apt to go moldy everywhere in a house owing to wet climate. And also we have to be cautious about food poisoning. Anyway, after long wet season TSUYU, the heat wave takes over. It'll last until the end of August.

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],   We only have 2 seasons here in the Philipines. The dry season and the wet season. The dry season starts from November to May and in between these months is our summer. We only have a quick summer where in the temperature is elevated higher than the normal temperature. Our summer season is from April to May only. From June to October it rains most of the time and we also experience typhoons during this period.   It is summer now here in my country, so it is hot and people usually go to the beach to cool down. Unfortunately I am inland so I can't go for a swim.   Have a nice day!   Sincerely yours,T. Lirah I'd like to tell you about Japanese climate, especially a rainy season called TSUYU.>>I'd like to tell you about the Japanese climate, especially the rainy season called TSUYU.In Japan, it becomes a rainy season from May to July every year.>>In Japan, it becomes the rainy season from May to July every year.Of course, there is this kind of season in Korea, called JANGMA. >>Of course, there is this kind of season in Korea as well, we call it JANGMA. How about Philippine? >>How about in the Philippines?It rains for 3-4 days a week. And we need a strong umbrella and a RAINBOOTS because the wind is getting heavy. >>It rains for about 3-4 days a week and we need a sturdy umbrella and a pair of rain boots because the wind gets heavy and the rain gets stronger. Last year I didn't have those items. It was hard time without them.>>Last year I didn't have those items so it was really a hard time for me without them.Therefore, I will buy them this year no matter what.>>Therefore, I have to buy these things this year no matter what.By the way, it comes faster than Korea and last longer.>>By the way, TSUYU comes faster in Japan and last longer than in Korea.In this season, It is apt to go moldy everywhere in a house owing to wet climate. >>In this season, It is undoubtedly going to be moldy everywhere in the house owing it to the wet climate. And also we have to be cautious about food poisoning. >>We also have to be cautious about food poisoning during this season. Anyway, after long wet season TSUYU, the heat wave takes over. >>Anyway, after the long wet season TSUYU, the heat wave takes over. It'll last until the end of August. >>Correct.

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