Dear [Name],

2010-04-23 · 첨삭 강사 kaycee

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm going hiking this Sunday. My friend who went to see a regatta together invited me to the foreign students spring sports fair. Good morning Mia. Anything new? I'm great. Thank you for inviting me. I really love hiking. I've wanted to go hiking in Japan. My wish finally came true. Wow it's wonderful. By the way, did you go a mountain climbing often in Madagascar? In Korea, there is Jiri mountain being famous for scenery. But the mountain has rough and irregular sides so that it's not easy to climb it. I have climbed it three times until now. Climbing the mountain was a kind of challenge for me. I really like Jiri mountain and hiking itself. Oh! Have you ever been to Huji mountain?

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],   Keep up the spirit! Keep talking and you should always find time to talk with you classmates. You should never forget the reason why you are studying English. This is a very nice dialogue. You see, you know what to say but the only problem is that you don't say it. Just relax when you are having a conversation in English. Ask them to repeat it when you did not understand. They will gladly repeat it for you because the main goal of communication is to understand each other.   I am expecting something good to happen in your week end activity. I'll see you on monday! Take care!   Sincerely yours,Lirah     I'm going hiking this Sunday. My friend who went to see a regatta together invited me to the foreign students spring sports fair. >>I will go hiking this Sunday. My friend who went to see the regatta with me invited me to the foreign students' spring sports fair. Good morning Mia. Anything new?>>Correct>>Yes Julie, how are you doing? Would you like to go hiking with me this Sunday?I'm great. Thank you for inviting me. I really love hiking.>>CorrectI've wanted to go hiking in Japan. My wish finally came true. Wow it's wonderful.>>I've wanted to go hiking here in Japan. My wish finally came true. Wow it's wonderful.By the way, did you go a mountain climbing often in Madagascar? >>By the way, do you go for a mountain climbing often in Madagascar? In Korea, there is Jiri mountain being famous for scenery. But the mountain has rough and irregular sides so that it's not easy to climb it. >>In Korea, there is a Jiri mountain that is so famous for its beautiful scenery. The mountain has rough and irregular sides so it's not easy to climb this mountain.I have climbed it three times until now. Climbing the mountain was a kind of challenge for me. I really like Jiri mountain and hiking itself.>>I have climbed this mountain three times already. Climbing this mountain was a challenge for me. I really like Jiri mountain and I like hiking itself.Oh! Have you ever been to Huji mountain?  >>Correct                                          

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