Dear [Name],

2010-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 kaycee

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday I asked you about Jason Mraz. I didn't know him two weeks ago. Now I get to like him. I strongly recommend you “I'm Yours”. This song is really wonderful. Did I tell you that I love travels? Listening to his music, I'm eager to travel somewhere. By the way, today's lesson was so difficult but it was helpful because I usually can't give a appropriate response quickly in casual conversation with friends. It looked like real situation and I was more nervous than previous lessons. Thank you. Well, it'll be holidays called Golden Week from tomorrow to next Wednesday. But I have no plan so I'll study English and prepare a research presentation. Do you think I'll do these really instead of hanging out?

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],   I can see lots of potential in you when it comes to English communication and that is the reason why I wanted to try something useful for you. I wanted us to try something new and soemthing essential. I know you love to travel and I wish someday I can travel with you in a beautiful place. I'm not really into Jason Mraz but I know lots of girls are crazy about him. "I'm Yours" is one of the most requested songs in my country and I already heard it several times. I like this song because of the beat and my favorite is the guitar part. I think this song portrays a happy feeling and a happy summer vacation!   What do they usually do during this holiday and why did they call it the Golden week? See you soon. Take care!   Sincerely, [이름]     Yesterday I asked you about Jason Mraz. >>CorrectI didn't know him two weeks ago. >>I didn't know him until two weeks ago. Now I get to like him. I strongly recommend you “I'm Yours”. >>Now I get to like him. I strongly recommend to you “I'm Yours”. This song is really wonderful. >>CorrectDid I tell you that I love travels? Listening to his music, I'm eager to travel somewhere.>>Did I tell you that I love traveling? Listening to his music and I'm eager to travel somewhere.By the way, today's lesson was so difficult but it was helpful because I usually can't give a appropriate response quickly in casual conversation with friends. >>By the way, today's lesson was so difficult but it was helpful because I usually can't give an appropriate response quickly in casual conversation with friends. It looked like real situation and I was more nervous than previous lessons. Thank you.>>It looked like a real situation and I was more nervous than the previous lessons. Thank you.Well, it'll be holidays called Golden Week from tomorrow to next Wednesday. >>Well, it'll be holidays here in Japan starting tomorrow until next Wednesday, this time is called the Golden Week.But I have no plan so I'll study English and prepare a research presentation. Do you think I'll do these really instead of hanging out? >>But I have no plan so I'll study English and prepare for a research presentation. Do you think I'll do these instead of hanging out? >>But I have no plan so I'll study English and prepare for a research presentation. Do I really have to do this instead of hanging out? What do you think?

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