Dear [Name],
학생이 쓴 원문
I know my composition was too late but I want to finish this month's compositions.
I was not good on yesterday and today's lesson. Today was second lesson with you but actually I couldn't understand exactly what you were saying. Your pronunciation is little bit different to previous teacher. I'm not accustomed to it. But I guess it'll be better.
And there is another problem. I seem to have lost the will to study from last Saturday. I couldn't concentrate on our lessons.
As I told you, I had a presentation last Saturday. It was terrible.
The professor's critics were awful. So I lost all my drive.
I need a minute to collect myself.
I'll register this month’s class after a while. I don't know if you'll become my teacher or not.
If so, I will try to do my best.
강사 첨삭
Hi Joo Yun! It's me again, Teacher Jazz. I enjoy reading your compositions. They gave me a picture of you. Keep on putting your thoughts into words by writing more. Have a wonderful day!
Jazz ^^
I know my composition was too late but I want to finish this month's compositions.
>>correctI was not good on yesterday and today's lesson.
>>I didn't do well in our class yesterday and even today.
Today was second lesson with you but actually I couldn't understand exactly what you were saying.
>>Today we had our second lesson but actually I couldn't understand exactly what you're saying.
Your pronunciation is little bit different to previous teacher.
>>Your pronunciation is a little bit different form my previous teacher.
I'm not accustomed to it.
>>correct
But I guess it'll be better.
>>correctAnd there is another problem.
>>correct
I seem to have lost the will to study from last Saturday.
>>I seem to have lost my will to study since last Saturday.
I couldn't concentrate on our lessons.
>>correctAs I told you, I had a presentation last Saturday.
>>correct
It was terrible.
>>correctThe professor's critics were awful.
>>correct
So I lost all my drive.
>>correctI need a minute to collect myself.
>>correctI'll register this month’s class after a while.
>>correct
I don't know if you'll become my teacher or not.
>>I don't know if you'll still be my teacher.If so, I will try to do my best.
>>correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.