Dear [Name],

2010-05-05 · 첨삭 강사 kaycee

학생이 쓴 원문

I know my composition was too late but I want to finish this month's compositions. I was not good on yesterday and today's lesson. Today was second lesson with you but actually I couldn't understand exactly what you were saying. Your pronunciation is little bit different to previous teacher. I'm not accustomed to it. But I guess it'll be better. And there is another problem. I seem to have lost the will to study from last Saturday. I couldn't concentrate on our lessons. As I told you, I had a presentation last Saturday. It was terrible. The professor's critics were awful. So I lost all my drive. I need a minute to collect myself. I'll register this month’s class after a while. I don't know if you'll become my teacher or not. If so, I will try to do my best.

강사 첨삭

Hi Joo Yun! It's me again, Teacher Jazz. I enjoy reading your compositions. They gave me a picture of you. Keep on putting your thoughts into words by writing more. Have a wonderful day! Jazz ^^ I know my composition was too late but I want to finish this month's compositions. >>correctI was not good on yesterday and today's lesson. >>I didn't do well in our class yesterday and even today. Today was second lesson with you but actually I couldn't understand exactly what you were saying. >>Today we had our second lesson but actually I couldn't understand exactly what you're saying. Your pronunciation is little bit different to previous teacher. >>Your pronunciation is a little bit different form my previous teacher. I'm not accustomed to it. >>correct But I guess it'll be better. >>correctAnd there is another problem. >>correct I seem to have lost the will to study from last Saturday. >>I seem to have lost my will to study since last Saturday. I couldn't concentrate on our lessons. >>correctAs I told you, I had a presentation last Saturday. >>correct It was terrible. >>correctThe professor's critics were awful. >>correct So I lost all my drive. >>correctI need a minute to collect myself. >>correctI'll register this month’s class after a while. >>correct I don't know if you'll become my teacher or not. >>I don't know if you'll still be my teacher.If so, I will try to do my best. >>correct

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