Dear [Name],

2010-05-05 · 첨삭 강사 kaycee

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We talked about the yellow dust. I couldn’t response about that this morning. Actually I’ve not ever thought about the yellow dust in Japan. When I was in Korea, I thought it was terrible condition. But after coming here, I didn’t consider it because I guess pollen disease is more serious in Japan. Many people prepare a mask in spring. We can see the polluted air by pollen. After coming back home, we should wash hands clean and gargle. Oh, I searched about the yellow dust also. There is the yellow dust problem in Japan. Is there a same phenomenon in your country? By the way, as I wrote another composition, I’ll register a 20 minutes-class. I don’t know who will be my teacher. But I would like to talk to you again. See you. Best regards, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi Joo Yun! I am [Name] Jazz and I'll be checking your compositions. Please don't be shy to write more about your ideas. Have a wonderful day! Jazz ^^   We talked about the yellow dust. >>correct I couldn't response about that this morning. >>I couldn't respond about that this morning. Actually, I've not ever thought about the yellow dust in Japan. Actually, I've never thought about the yellow dust in Japan. When I was in Korea, I thought it was terrible condition. >>When I was in Korea, I thought that it was a terrible condition. But after coming here, I didn't consider it because I guess pollen disease is more serious in Japan. >>But when I came here, I guess hay fever is more serious in Japan. Many people prepare a mask in spring. >>correct We can see the polluted air by pollen. >>We can see the air polluted with pollen. After coming back home, we should wash hands clean and gargle. >>When we get back home, we should wash our hands and we should gargle. Oh, I searched about the yellow dust also. >>Oh, I also searched about yellow dust. There is the yellow dust problem in Japan. >>There is a yellow dust problem in Japan. Is there a same phenomenon in your country? >>Is there a similar phenomenon in your country? By the way, as I wrote another composition, I'll register a 20 minutes-class. >>By the way, as I wrote another composition, I registered a 20-minute class. I don't know who will be my teacher. But I would like to talk to you again. >>I don't know who will my teacher be, but I would like to talk to you again.

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