Dear [Name],

How are you? I’m in school. Today is very hot. According to the weather forecast, it will rain tomorrow. It is too shiny now so I can’t believe that it’ll rain tomorrow. By the way, may I request you something? First, as I told you in our class, you speak so fast that I can’t catch you. Please speak more slowly. Next, would you correct my composition not other teachers. Even if I upload daily composition late, I’d like you to check it. I’ll try to write it as soon as possible, I mean during the morning. I don’t know your teaching type. So, I’d like to take a lesson by textbook tomorrow. I can make it. I can make it. I can make it. I’ll see you around.

hi good morning and happy Friday, [이름]!!! Hope you have a great weekend.   How are you?I’m in school. Today is very hot.According to the weather forecast, it will rain tomorrow. It is too shiny now so I can’t believe that it’ll rain tomorrow. >>everything in this stanza is correct. By the way, may I request you something? >>By the way, may I request something from you? First, as I told you in our class, you speak so fast that I can’t catch you. >>correctPlease speak more slowly. >>correctNext, would you correct my composition not other teachers. >>correctEven if I upload daily composition late, I’d like you to check it. >>Even if I upload the daily composition late, I’d like you to check it.I’ll try to write it as soon as possible, I mean during the morning. >>>>correctI don’t know your teaching type. So, I’d like to take a lesson by textbook tomorrow.>>I don’t know your teaching type. So, I’d like to take the lesson with the textbook tomorrow.I can make it. I can make it. I can make it. I’ll see you around.   I’ll see you later…