Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm really happy to meet you again. I thought I couldn't meet you again. Just because of my private reason, I took a short break. That's why I thought I couldn't take advantage of you any more. ^^ Any way, good to have you back.
It's getting hotter and hotter these days in Korea. In my case, I hate this sweltering hot weather condition. Not only it makes me sweat but also I don't like atmosphere under an air conditioner. Some experts say air conditioner could make our immune system weak. Don't forget to open the window once an hour to let fresh air in. KK
Enjoy rest of your day. See you tomorrow. Until then, bye.
Written by : [이름]
강사 첨삭
Hello there^_^Thank you so much for sending your compostion. It was also nice to see you again^_^ Takecare and you also enjoy the rest of the day^^
T. Verna
I\'m really happy to meet you again.
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I thought I couldn\'t meet you again.
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Just because of my private reason, I took a short break.
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That\'s why I thought I couldn\'t take advantage of you any more. ^^
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Any way, good to have you back.>>>CORRECTIt\'s getting hotter and hotter these days in Korea.
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In my case, I hate this sweltering hot weather condition.
>>>CORRECT
Not only it makes me sweat but also I don\'t like atmosphere under an air conditioner.
>>>It doesn\'t only make me perspire but I also don\'t like atmosphere under an air conditioner.
Some experts say air conditioner could make our immune system weak.
>>>CORRECT
Don\'t forget to open the window once an hour to let fresh air in. KK
>>>Don\'t forget to open the window once in an hour to let fresh air come in. KK^^Enjoy rest of your day.
>>Enjoy the rest of your day.
See you tomorrow. Until then, bye.
>>CORRECTWritten by : [이름]
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