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2012-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hello again, it's good takling to you this afternoon. I was surprised you enjoy Sam-kyeob-sal which means three layers flesh. Why don't you give it a try Soju next time. They matches well, especially with good friends. We discussed Makgeolli also known as rice wine, did we? My mother told me she used to go get Makgeolli due to her father's order. It took little while to get there. So, on her way back to home, she drank Makgeolli when she felt thirsty. Finally, she got back home but she realized there's no Makgeolli left in a kettle. You know what? You've gotta be careful. Usually, we suffer from hangover with slight headache after drinking too much Makgeolli. This is because Makgeolli doesn't have bitter taste like Soju. People are far more likely to lose self-control when drinking Makgeolli. ^^ It's not my personal story. Don't get me wrong. KK. See you tomorrow afternoon. Take care. Written by : [이름]

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Hi! ^ ^ You made good sentences! ^ ^ Ok, I will try to drink it with Soju next time. Thanks for the tip! ^ ^ Ok, I will keep that in mind! See you tomorrow!^^ T. Verna Here are my corrections for you: Hello again, it\'s good takling to you this afternoon. >>>Hello again! It\'s good talking to you this afternoon. I was surprised you enjoy Sam-kyeob-sal which means three layers flesh. >>>I was surprised you enjoy Sam-kyeob-sal which means \"three layers flesh\". >>>OR I was surprised you enjoy Sam-kyeob-sal which means \"three layers of flesh\". Why don\'t you give it a try Soju next time. >>>Why don\'t you try Soju next time? >>>OR Why don\'t you try to eat it with Soju next time? They matches well, especially with good friends. >>>They match well, especially with good friends.We discussed Makgeolli also known as rice wine, did we? >>>CORRECT My mother told me she used to go get Makgeolli due to her father\'s order. >>>My mother told me that she used to get Makgeolli for her father. >>>OR My mother told me that she used to get Makgeolli because her father ordered her to do so. It took little while to get there. >>>It took a little time to get there. So, on her way back to home, she drank Makgeolli when she felt thirsty. >>>So, on her way back home, she drank Makgeolli when she felt thirsty. Finally, she got back home but she realized there\'s no Makgeolli left in a kettle. >>>Finally, she got back home but she realized that there\'s no Makgeolli left in the kettle.You know what? >>>CORRECT You\'ve gotta be careful. >>>CORRECT >>>OR You\'ve got to be careful. Usually, we suffer from hangover with slight headache after drinking too much Makgeolli. >>>CORRECT >>>OR Usually, we suffer from a hangover with slight headache after drinking too much Makgeolli. This is because Makgeolli doesn\'t have bitter taste like Soju. >>>CORRECT >>>OR This is because Makgeolli doesn\'t have a bitter taste like Soju. People are far more likely to lose self-control when drinking Makgeolli. ^^ >>>CORRECT It\'s not my personal story. >>>CORRECT Don\'t get me wrong. KK. >>>CORRECT See you tomorrow afternoon. >>>CORRECT Take care. >>>CORRECTWritten by : [이름] >>>CORRECT

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