Dear [Name]

2012-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm happy for you to have had a nice holiday, especially your school reunion. As I'm getting older, it's getting more difficult to meet my school friends again because they're busy making their own living. I also took part in my high school reunion last year. It was the first time since I graduated from high school 2001. It was much more interesting than I expected. I could meet my former teachers, seniors and my friends. We spent all day on enjoying several sports and singing contest. Luckly, I won the prize by drawing straws. One of my friends even got a bicycle just because he brought his adorable cute daughter. Frankly, I'm looking forward to it this year. ^^ Any way, see you tomorrow morning. Bye. Written by : [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hello there! I appreciate you for doing your composition. It was a great and a perfect one! I admire your brilliant ideas. I\'m still looking forwad reading some more compositions from you. Have a great one! T Verna^_^ Here are my corrections for you: I\'m happy for you to have had a nice holiday, especially your school reunion. >> Correct >>OR >> I\'m happy for you having a nice holiday and having a school reunion.As I\'m getting older, it\'s getting more difficult to meet my school friends again because they\'re busy making their own living. >> Correct I also took part in my high school reunion last year. >> Correct It was the first time since I graduated from high school 2001. >> Correct It was much more interesting than I expected. >> Correct I could meet my former teachers, seniors and my friends. >> Correct We spent all day on enjoying several sports and singing contest. >>We spent all day in enjoying several sports and singing contest. Luckly, I won the prize by drawing straws. >> Correct One of my friends even got a bicycle just because he brought his adorable cute daughter. >> Correct Frankly, I\'m looking forward to it this year. ^^ >> CorrectAny way, see you tomorrow morning. Bye. >> Anyway, see you tomorrow morning.  

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