Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
I think conversing with you is always sensible. I believe you are ready to be a parent. I could imagine how blessed your children would be to have you. ^^ Btw, I\'m going to tell you about kindergarten situation in the Philippines in the class. See you! :D
-Teacher Verna-
Hi, happy Thursday.
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We have one more day left until this fabulous weekend.
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I\'m very curious what you\'re gonna do this weekend.
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In my case, I\'ll hit the books during whole weekend. ^^
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I mean I have to prepare for my final test in advance.
Today, we talked about day-care center.
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I didn\'t ask you how day-care centers go on in your country.
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As I already mentioned, more and more women in Korea are working even after they bore their little babies and toddlers.
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In addition to, their grandparents also refuse to look after them.
>> In addition, their grandparents also refuse to look after them.
That\'s why it\'s totally hard to find vacancy in day-care center especially big cities like Seoul.
I don\'t care whether moms work or not.
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If I were same situations, I\'d rather take a break for a while in order to take good care of my baby.
>> If I were in the same situation, I\'d rather take a break for a while in order to take good care of my baby.
I\'m not sure if my company waits for me or not, though. KK.
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I heard relationship with parents especially during infancy is as much important as breast feeding for baby\'s mental and physical health. -[이름]-
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