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2012-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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TGIF! Come to think of it, next Wednesday is also national holiday, which is the memorial day for our ancestors who devoted their lives to our country. I wish it would be next Monday. ^^ We talked about cohabitation before getting married. In my opinion, I don't really care about that as long as they take responsibilities for each other. I mean couples who live togeter must have fallen in love each other. They both want to live in the same house. It's also some sort of way to know each other unlike the way their parents did back in the day. No one forced them to do that. However, it could cause serious social problems unless they live together responsibly. They're not kids any more. They are the people who know what they do and know what they mustn't. That's why, when it comes to cohabitating, I think it's totally up to theirselves to live together or not before getting married. Have a nice weekend. I'll be right here by Next class. Written by: [이름]

강사 첨삭

TGIF to you too! Yes you\'re right. Responsibility takes precedence over this topic. They also must be willing enough to work things out as well as to compromise in certain situations. Thanks for sharing your opinion. :) See ya! T. Verna TGIF! Come to think of it, next Wednesday is also national holiday, which is the memorial day for our ancestors who devoted their lives to our country. >>TGIF! Come to think of it, next Wednesday is also a national holiday, which is the memorial day for our ancestors who devoted their lives to our country.  I wish it would be next Monday. ^^ >>Correct!We talked about cohabitation before getting married. >>Correct!  In my opinion, I don\'t really care about that as long as they take responsibilities for each other. >>Correct! I mean couples who live togeter must have fallen in love each other. >>I mean couples who live together must have fallen in love with each other.  They both want to live in the same house. >>Correct! It\'s also some sort of way to know each other unlike the way their parents did back in the day. >>Correct! No one forced them to do that. >>Correct!  However, it could cause serious social problems unless they live together responsibly. >>Correct! They\'re not kids any more. >>Correct! They are the people who know what they do and know what they mustn\'t. >>They are people who know what they\'re doing and know what they mustn\'t. That\'s why, when it comes to cohabitating, I think it\'s totally up to theirselves to live together or not before getting married. >>That\'s why when it comes to cohabitating, I think it\'s totally up to themselves to live together or not before getting married.Have a nice weekend. >>Correct! I\'ll be right here by Next class. >>I\'ll be right here for our next class.  Written by: [이름] >>Correct!

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