Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
Thank you for this composition. I hope your brother\'s wedding is going to be a great one. Let\'s talk about it on Thursday! Happy holiday!
-Teacher Verna-
Good to have you back.
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I couldn\'t help putting off our class yesterday due to my private reason. I missed you a lot. ^^
I have a brother, two years younger than me, he is getting married this Sunday.
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Since he was born in 1985, we had fought frequently with each other.
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I even broke my guitar because I hit him by the guitar.
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He used to be my sandbag, target for B.B gun and counterpart in almost every sports we played togher.
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I had taken advantage of him when I needed him.
However, he used to be the one who thought me as the best guy he\'s ever seen in this planet.
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Even if I got frustrated and failed, he would trust and count on me.
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If only I would have been better brother everyone was jealous of.
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I think I\'m still not the best brother for him. I don\'t get in touch with him a lot by way of excuse of being hectic.
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From now on, I\'m gonna try more so that our brotherhood lasts unconditionally. Enjoy your short break. Bye.
Written by: [이름]
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