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Good to hear that you get along with your parents-in-laws. Senior people say the farther parents-in-laws and fetid toilets there are, the better we can live. These days, many people have counted on thier parents even after they got married. Their parents also get used to taking care of thier adult children. For mother-in-law, daughter-in-law still look immature in every house chores. That's why daughter-in-law always get stressed out whenever mother-in-law visit her house. I heard many young women answered they wouldn't give password for their house gate if their mother-in-law asked that. The trouble between family-in-laws has been one of the most serious social problems in Korea. But I also heard more and more parents-in-laws are trying to understand their daughter or son-in-laws. Some families keep their lives much happier than before they lived together with parents. Many Korean young wives are probably jealous to know your good relation with your mother-in-law I guess.

Hi! You have a good composition here. I like the fact that you are a person full of ideas. I encourage you to express your thoughts more. Good job! Just be careful with tenses and spellings. T. Verna Here are your corrections: Good to hear that you get along with your parents-in-laws. >>It is good to hear that you get along with your parents-in-law. OR >>It is good to hear that you get along with your parent-in-laws. Senior people say the farther parents-in-laws and fetid toilets there are, the better we can live. >>Senior people say, the farther parent-in-laws and fetid toilets are, the better we can live. These days, many people have counted on thier parents even after they got married. >>These days, many people have counted on their parents even after they got married. Their parents also get used to taking care of thier adult children. >>Their parents also get used to taking care of their adult children. For mother-in-law, daughter-in-law still look immature in every house chores. >>For a mother-in-law, she thinks that her daughter-in-law is still immature in every house chores. OR >>For mother-in-laws, they think that their daughter-in-laws still look immature in every house chores. That\'s why daughter-in-law always get stressed out whenever mother-in-law visit her house. >>That\'s why the daughter-in-law always gets stressed out whenever the mother-in-law visits her house. I heard many young women answered they wouldn\'t give password for their house gate if their mother-in-law asked that. >>I heard from many young women, they wouldn\'t give the password of their house gates if their mother-in-law asked for that. The trouble between family-in-laws has been one of the most serious social problems in Korea. >>CORRECT OR But I also heard more and more parents-in-laws are trying to understand their daughter or son-in-laws. >>But I also heard that a lot of parent-in-laws are trying to understand their daughter or son-in-laws. Some families keep their lives much happier than before they lived together with parents. >>Some families keep their lives much happier than before they lived together with their parents. Many Korean young wives are probably jealous to know your good relation with your mother-in-law I guess. >>I guess many Korean young wives are probably jealous to know your good relationship with your mother-in-law.